Dead World Attempt 1

This is sweet. One suggestion is on the atmosphere. If you look at a really well made planet like by Alyn, Greg Martin, etc. you will notice their outer glow is very VERY small. I prefer it that was as well, because a real atmosphere doesnt expand very far away from the planet. Ironically I think you have it backwards. Like I said on the second attempt, I think the inner glow should be more soft and larger and the outer glow should be much more compact. Try it and tell me how it turns out!